My work explores stillness, inward presence, and quiet authority within contemporary African life through a painterly language I describe as Quiet Monumentalism.
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Thursday, January 15, 2026
Silent / Quiet Monumentalism - Version 1 vs Version 2
Silent / Quiet Monumentalism - Version 1 vs Version 2 | Pieter Lategan
This post documents a controlled refinement process inside my framework of Silent / Quiet Monumentalism.
The two images below depict the same solitary, inward-turned seated figure.
The difference is not “style” or “mood” — it is discipline:
what was removed, what was subordinated, and how the figure is allowed to hold presence without explanation.
Reading
Stillness is present, but surface information arrives before mass fully settles.
Description
Version 1 establishes the core posture correctly. The body folds inward, the shoulders compress, and the figure carries weight without gesture or narrative. Structurally, the work qualifies as Silent / Quiet Monumentalism. However, it retains a higher degree of surface articulation—fine marks, mapping, or tracery-like detail—that slightly competes with the reading of mass.
What Version 1 Does Well
Clear compression through spine, pelvis, and shoulders
Anonymous figure with no portrait logic
Muted palette and contained spatial field
Presence carried primarily through posture
Why Version 1 Is Less “Silent”
Surface marks compete with the perception of weight
The eye is invited to read detail too early
Silence is present, but partially annotated
Version 1 establishes stillness through posture and surface;
Reading
Mass and gravity arrive first; surface becomes subordinate. The figure holds presence without asking to be read.
Description
Version 2 is a disciplined refinement of Version 1. The posture remains unchanged, but the image becomes quieter through subtraction. Competing surface marks are reduced, tonal continuity is strengthened, and the relationship between figure and background is more restrained. The figure is no longer described; it is held.
What Version 2 Improves
Mass reads before detail
Surface becomes secondary to structure
Edges compress rather than outline
Background recedes into architectural silence
Why Version 2 Is More Silent Monumentalism
Reduced visual noise; fewer interpretive hooks
Stillness functions structurally, not atmospherically
Restraint is achieved through control, not minimalism
Version 2 allows stillness to be carried by mass, gravity, and restraint alone.
What Changed — In One Sentence
Version 1 is stillness with more surface mapping; Version 2 is stillness held by tonal weight,
where the figure exists without explanation.
The Silent Monumentalism Check
A useful test inside this practice is subtraction: if surface marks are reduced and the work still holds, then presence is
carried by structure — not decoration. In Version 2, the figure remains inevitable even with less information.
That is the core discipline of Silent / Quiet Monumentalism.
Next Step: Digital Study → Oil Painting
Version 2 is the stronger foundation for an oil painting translation. In oil, the goal is not to reintroduce line information,
but to let paint thickness, edge control, and tonal compression carry the same inward weight.
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